有很多人和事, 甚至一個眼神,一個微笑都會改變我們的生活。張貝就曾遇到了改變他一生的一個微笑。 請根據(jù)提示以“A special smile”為題寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。

內(nèi)容提示:

過去

現(xiàn)在

1.孤獨

2.沒有朋友,害怕和別人交朋友

1. 同學的一個微笑改變了他的生活

2. 他試著與同學交流

3. 感悟 … …

A Special Smile

 

 

 

 

 

 

A special smile

His name is Zhang Bei who used to be a very shy boy. He had no friends and he always felt lonely. He was so afraid to communicate with others that he would rather sit in the corner and do nothing.

One day his deskmate smiled to him. The smile was a sunshine and it broke his sadness. They try to talk with each other. And Zhang Bei found it was easy to relate his opinions to others. Now he knows that if you treat people sincerely, they will return you a smile.

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給提示寫寫一篇以A special smile為題的作文。本文所給材料比較詳細,并且給出了具體要求,我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,并適當發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】

這篇文章語言規(guī)范,敘事清楚,詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確,能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚,語句通順,意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。

考點:命題式作文

 

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