Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是Simon，要給班主任王老師寫(xiě)一封推薦信，推薦David 當(dāng)班長(zhǎng)，要點(diǎn)如下：

優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)	主要表現(xiàn)
勤 奮	參加音樂(lè)俱樂(lè)部?jī)赡甓�，每天練唱兩小時(shí)。
善 良	常與同學(xué)們一起工作，合作的很好，不介意為學(xué)校做額外的工作。
慷 慨	每年都捐錢(qián)給慈善機(jī)構(gòu)。
助人為樂(lè)	有一次……

注意： 1. “有一次……”處須用3、4句話展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 推薦信包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。

3. 詞數(shù)100左右，格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Wang,

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Yours Sincerely

Simon

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m writing to recommend David as our monitor. David is excellent. He has many good personal qualities.

David is hard-working. He has been in the Music Club for over 2 years. He practices singing for 2 hours every day. He’s very kind and friendly. He likes working with his classmates and never minds doing extra work for the school. David is generous, too. Every year he donates his pocket money to the charities. He’s also helpful. One day, on his way to the cinema, he found a boy crying in the street. He helped the child find his parents. Because of it, he missed his favourite film.

I think David has all the qualities to be a good monitor. I hope you can agree with me.

Yours sincerely

Simon

【解析】

試題分析：在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫(xiě)作提綱，主要包括四方面的內(nèi)容。一是他的勤奮.二是他的善良.三是他的慷慨,四是他的助人為樂(lè),在他的助人為樂(lè)方面,需要展開(kāi)豐富的想象,另外，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者從提綱的四個(gè)方面，講述了Dvide的優(yōu)秀。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)。如One day, on his way to the cinema, he found a boy crying in the street. He helped the child find his parents. Because of it, he missed his favourite film.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如He likes working with his classmates and never minds doing extra work for the school.等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文。