Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分10分）

生活中你有怎樣的習(xí)慣？好習(xí)慣？壞習(xí)慣還是健康的習(xí)慣？請認(rèn)真思考，反思自己。以“ habits”為題說說你的習(xí)慣。

要求：1、注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范；2、不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和校名；3、詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)。

Habits

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Habits

I have some habits, some are good, but some are bad.

I like reading very much. From reading science books, I get a lot of knowledge. From reading novels, I lose myself in the stories. I like doing sports, too. It helps me keep healthy. Also I never put today's work till tomorrow. They are all my good habits. They help me a lot in my daily life.

However, I also have some bad habits. For example, sometimes I do my homework slowly, and stay up till very late. During meals I prefer meat to vegetables. And sometimes I play computer games too long without having a rest. They are all harmful to my health. From now on I'll try to keep my good habits, and give up the bad ones. Then I'll live better.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料極其詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是要認(rèn)真思考，反思自己，用正確的英語把自己的習(xí)慣表達(dá)出來。根據(jù)作文內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，段落清晰。使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如:be harmful to 對……有害；give up放棄。 It helps me keep healthy. 它讓我保持健康。Also I never put today's work till tomorrow我也從來沒有把今天的工作留到明天During meals I prefer meat to vegetables. 吃飯時(shí)我更喜歡肉不喜歡蔬菜。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。