Question

根據(jù)所給情景寫一封不少于60詞的信

      Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. （假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因為過于在意考試結(jié)果而感到焦慮。請給她寫一封信，談談你的看法，并給她一些建議。）

（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

 

Answer 1

【答案】

（范文摘自網(wǎng)絡，范文分析出自本人）

More and more people like shopping（like doing sth） in supermarkets, which（定語從句） have developed rapidly in recent years. This, of course, has something to do with the convenience they offer to customers.

Firstly, prices in supermarkets are much lower, for they are run in the self-service style, therefore, fewer shop assistants are needed. Secondly, a wide variety of goods are displayed to satisfy the needs of different people. Thirdly, supermarkets usually have longer opening hours than other shops and stores.

Shopping in supermarkets can make customers feel confident, comfortable and relaxed. Moreover, it saves them both time and money.

That's why supermarkets are getting more and more crowded nowadays.

【解析】這類作文屬于開放型作文，學生可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，自由表達自己的想法，考生可以發(fā)揮自己的英語水平，區(qū)分度明顯，成績好的學生可以寫出高級句型，顯示自己的英語水平，如果成績不好的學生，過多使用普通句式，文章就顯得dry。

作文點評：文章的層次分明，邏輯感強，Firstly，Secondly, Thirdly，等使人覺得文章很通暢，這是現(xiàn)在非常欠缺的。此外，短語，例如has something to do with，offer to，both   and等都用得非常好，還有定語從句，名詞性從句，是一遍值得學習的范文，考生應該在平時多積累這些文章。