Question

假如你看到或聽到下面這則消息，請以李華的名義，給你的英國筆友Davy發(fā)一封電子郵件，告訴他這個(gè)感人的故事及你的感受。

河北農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)93級學(xué)生李寶元因病于1996年去世。他所在班級的26名同學(xué)決定共同幫助李寶元的父母。十五年來，他們寄出15張匯敖羊和56封信。

提示：(1) Tell him the true story.
(2) Talk about how you feel about it.
(3) Say something about what you can learn from it.
要求：
（1）文稿須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
（2）電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
（3）詞數(shù)：60?80個(gè)。
參考詞匯：money order (匯款單), go on, be moved (感動(dòng)), be full of love
I'd like to tell you a true story. Li Baoyuan. a student of Hebei Agricultural University came from a poor family. Unluckily,
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Answer 1

Possible version
Hi Davy,
I’d like to tell you a true story. Li Baoyuan, a student of Hebei Agricultural University came from a poor family. Unluckily, he became ill and died in 1996. However, all his 26 classmates decided to help Baoyuan’s parents. In the past fifteen years, they’ve sent 15 money orders and 56 letters to his parents. And their true love is still going on...I’m really moved. As a student, I should learn from them and try to help others. If everyone would like to do that, the whole world will be full of love!
What do you think of it?
Please write soon!
Li Hua

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