Question

假如上周末你和班上的同學(xué)到方山玩得很快樂。請以My happy weekend 為題，根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文。
一. 要點(diǎn)提示
1.時間是星期天早上8點(diǎn)；
2.學(xué)校門口集合，人到齊后就出發(fā)；
3.騎自行車到達(dá)目的地大約30分鐘；
4.有拍照，游戲，野餐等活動；
5.大家都渡過了一個快樂的周末。
二. 要求
1.詞數(shù)為80詞左右（已給出的短文開頭部分不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2.所有要點(diǎn)提示必須用完，不得逐字翻譯；
3.字跡工整，卷面整潔；
4.不得用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
三.參考詞匯
Get together, ride, photo, games, pinic
My happy weekend
Last weekend, my classmates and I went to Fangshan. It was so interesting ________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

One possible version：
My happy weekend
Last weekend, my classmate and I went to Fangshan. It was so interesting.
At 8:00 on Sunday morning, we got together at the school gate. When everyone arrived, we started. We liked riding, se we went there by bike. After about 30 minutes’ ride, we got there. We found a beautiful place to have a rest. And we took many beautiful photos and played games together. When we felt a little hungry, we took out our food to have a picnic. Everyone ate a lot. We all had a happy weekend.

試題分析：這題是要點(diǎn)作文，就是要求考生根據(jù)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行翻譯，不能遺漏，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容可知要用簡單句，包括主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)，還有there be句型，寫作時要靈活運(yùn)用，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫正確。
點(diǎn)評：要點(diǎn)作文因為要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)很明確，只要將要點(diǎn)翻譯清楚就可以，要注意使用英語的句型翻譯，可以避免出現(xiàn)漢語表達(dá)。如there be句型，或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)使用頻率都很高。