Question

假如李明是你的好朋友，根據(jù)提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文介紹李明的業(yè)余愛好。（短文開頭已給出）

提示語：

1.李明以前是個電影迷, 一周至少去看兩次電影，有時租VCD在家里看，最喜歡的影星是姜文；

2.李明現(xiàn)在的興趣是集郵, 認為集郵非常有趣，可以從郵票上學到很多關于人物、地點、歷史的知識, 有些舊郵票非常有價值；

3.上周五是李明的生日, 他從朋友那里得到了許多郵票，非常高興。

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be a movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometimes he rented VCDs and watched them at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen.

Now Lin Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it’s great fun. He can learn a lot about people, places, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable.

Last Friday was Li Ming’s birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。運用適當?shù)亩陶Z表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時也要符合事實。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。