Question

My Happiness
提示：幸福是什么？ 幸福是父母為你營造的溫馨的家， 幸福是老師投向你的贊喜的目光，幸福是孤獨時朋友送來的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 請以My Happiness 為題， 寫一件曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求：1．請按提示用英語寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于60個；
2．語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；
3．文中不得使用你的真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。

Answer 1

My Happiness.
Happiness is important in our life. In fact , happiness is always around you if you put heart into it.
I will never forget that day. That day, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was afraid to meet my parents. When I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, and they said to me, “ It doesn’t matter , my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.

這事一篇命題作文，題目為My happiness 我的幸福。文章題材為記敘文，要寫一件自己發(fā)生了的幸福事，所以要用第一人稱，時態(tài)用一般過去時。寫作時要注意記敘文的幾大要素，把故事交代清楚，句子結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，注意動詞的時態(tài)和主謂一致。
【亮點分析】
整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，思路清晰，三段落結(jié)構(gòu)很明顯。文章中用了很多短語和句式，使表達(dá)更精準(zhǔn)生動，例如：In fact, happiness is always around you if you put heart into it.事實上，只要你用心體會幸福一直在你身邊。Never give up! 永不放棄。I was moved and made up my mind to work harder.我感動了并下定決心更努力學(xué)習(xí)。Whenever I am in trouble……不管我何時處在困難中，等等。