以“My home town”為題，介紹一下你的家鄉(xiāng)變化，40—60詞。

 

 

 

 

 

 

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)所給材料可知這是一篇命題作文，動(dòng)筆前首先根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文包含了所有要點(diǎn)，能?chē)@內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。層次清晰，語(yǔ)言地道，主題鮮明，內(nèi)容翔實(shí)，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。使用了一些比較好的字句。比如：be rich in；take place；spring up；one after another；so as to等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。

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