Question

回憶一下自己曾經(jīng)度過的某一個美好的周末并寫一篇短文記錄下來。當(dāng)時天氣怎么樣？你是怎樣度過的？去哪兒了？和誰一起去的？都干什么了？要求：語句通順，語意連貫，語法正確。大約70詞左右。
                                                                                        
                                                                                       
                                                                                          

Answer 1

Last Sunday, it was sunny and I had a great time. In the morning, I got up early. After breakfast I went to the zoo with Bob. We saw a dolphin show. We took some photos there and bought some souvenirs, too. Then, we had some hamburgers for lunch at KFC. We also had some fruit ice cream. After lunch, we went to the Gift Shop and bought lots of gifts. Then we went to a bookshop and bought some books. Next, I hung out with Bob in the street. Finally, tired but happy, we took the bus back to school. At the end of the day, we watched a movie about living in the future. 

試題分析：本題是一篇話題作文。根據(jù)所給話題可知本文主要是一般過去時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】該文使用了不少短語，為文章增色不少。如had a great time、got up early、took some photos、hung out with Bob、At the end of the day等等。