Question

每個人都擁有自己心中的偶像，相信你的心中一定也有一顆“星”在閃爍。請根據(jù)以下要點，以“My Favorite Star"為題寫一篇80詞左右的文章介紹一位你所喜歡的明星(可以是歌星、影星、球星……)。

要點：(1)……是我所喜愛的明星；

(2)勸我喜歡他(她)的原因；

(3)他(她)的一些個人情況。

Answer 1

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解析：

One possible version： My Favorite Star 　　My favorite movie star is Jack Chan．He is a great actor．I like him very much not only because his movies are exciting but also because he is very friendly．I like his new movie "Speed" best．It's a very successful action movie． 　　Jack Chan is one of the most popular stars in the world．He is living in Hong Kong now．He likes the famous movie" Sleepless Night" very much．He also likes Beijing Opera．He has many fans, like me． 　　I hope he will be happy all his life, because he is my favorite star． 　　書面表達評分標準參考 　　說明：要求表達完整，句子通/頃，內(nèi)容與所給要求相符。 　　1)9－10分：能完整地敘述文章要點，字跡整潔、行文連貫、語言準確、字數(shù)合乎要求。 　　2)7－8分：能寫明絕大多數(shù)要點，表達清楚、行文連貫、語言基本無誤、字數(shù)合乎要求。 　　3)5－6分：能寫明絕大多數(shù)要點，表達較清楚、行文基本連貫、語言有少量錯誤、字數(shù)基本合乎要求。 　　4)3－4分：能寫出多數(shù)要點，語言有些錯誤、字數(shù)不足50字。 　　5)1－2分：能寫出部分要點，語言錯誤多、不能表達出完整的意思，字數(shù)不足40字。