Question

書面表達（滿分20分）

假設(shè)你是Han Mei，針對初三這一年的學(xué)習(xí)生活，結(jié)合自己的理想，談?wù)勗陲嬍�、健康、學(xué)習(xí)等方面自己的打算，并給家長或老師寫一封信，談?wù)勛约簯?yīng)該被允許和不被允許做的事情，并闡明理由。詞數(shù)80個左右 。在寫作過程中，不能出現(xiàn)你所在班級及你的真實姓名。

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Answer 1

Dear dad,

It seems that I’m very busy this year because we are going to take the entrance exam to high school. I think I should be allowed to eat snacks during the break because I always get hungry near noon. I should be allowed to eat junk food every day, because it’s delicious and I really like it. I should be allowed to play soccer after school. It’s good for my health too. I want to be a computer programmer when i grow up. so I should be allowed to join a computer club on weekends. besides I think I am old enough to get a driver’s license. I want to drive my car to school every day.

yours ever

Han Mei

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，寫一寫自己打算。由于在要點中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。根據(jù)要求可知本句主要是一般現(xiàn)在及過去時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如so I should be allowed to join a computer club on weekends.等，always等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：命題作文。