Question

假如你叫張蒙，班主任王老師想了解班級(jí)同學(xué)的狀況，以便有針對(duì)性地對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行考前心理疏導(dǎo)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容要求，給班主任王老師寫封e-mail，說(shuō)明自己的情況，并請(qǐng)她給你提一些建議。
內(nèi)容要求：
1、學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，睡眠不足，缺少體育活動(dòng)。同學(xué)間缺乏溝通和交流。
2、在家不允許看電視、上網(wǎng)、聽(tīng)音樂(lè)等。
(參考詞匯：have a lot of homework to do , not have enough time to sleep, do sports, talk/communicate, be not allowed to ,surf the Internet, listen to music)
注意：
1、字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、姓名。
2、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
From: zhangmeng@163.com To:chlw524@sina.com   Subject: problems Date: March 23
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I’m very glad to write to you.                                        
                                                                             
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                              
Best wishes,
Zhang Meng

Answer 1

From: zhangmeng@163.com To:chlw524@sina.com   Subject: problems Date: March 23
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I’m very glad to write to you. I have a lot of troubles these days. Every day I have a lot of homework to do at school. I don’t have enough time to sleep. I nearly have no time to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk or play together.
    When I get back home from school, I’m not allowed to watch TV, surf the Internet or listen to my favorite music. I feel worried about them. I don’t know what I should do. Could you please give me some suggestions?
Best wishes,
Zhang Meng

解析這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)表述，要求要點(diǎn)全面，不能有遺漏，還要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行處理加工，重要的內(nèi)容要突出的描寫，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用參考詞匯，注意時(shí)態(tài)的使用，這篇作文應(yīng)該是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，另外還要注意用一些好的句型：I have a lot of homework to do at school.這個(gè)句型在文章里使用的很好。I’m not allowed to watch TV,，這句話用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，I don’t know what I should do.這句話里what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。這些都是好作文必備的。