Question

書面表達(dá)（10分）

以為題寫一篇80詞左右的文章，文章要包括以下內(nèi)容：

1 起身晚，所以希望上學(xué)遲，放學(xué)早。有更多空余時(shí)間；

2學(xué)校餐廳大而明亮，可以在那吃飯或者聊天；

3 每天上電腦課，每人有臺(tái)電腦，可以玩游戲；

4 有很多書的圖書館，還有游泳池等；

5希望作業(yè)少，課外活動(dòng)多，周末不要做作業(yè)。

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Answer 1

My ideal school starts late because I like sleeping. It finishes early，so we have more free time. We have an hour for lunch .We can eat fruit, vegetables and healthy food. We can even choose any food you like in the dining hall. The dining hall is very big and clean. We can meet our friends and chat there .I think we will have a good time there .We have Computer Studies everyday because I like playing computer very much. I love reading, so we have many libraries. We have a swimming pool. And we don't have homework and exams. Twice a week ,we go on a school trip to a park or any other beautiful city！

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我理想的學(xué)校。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：have a good time；Twice a week，等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意本文要根據(jù)文章所列出的要點(diǎn)大綱逐個(gè)描述，不可遺漏。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了自己理想學(xué)校的上課時(shí)間，餐廳等設(shè)施，接下來指出學(xué)校的教學(xué)環(huán)境，最后指出想要的娛樂活動(dòng)。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。