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請根據(jù)以下提示，完成短文。題目“我的理想學校�！痹~數(shù)80左右。

起床晚，所以希望上學晚，放學早。有很多的空余時間。

學校餐廳大而亮�？梢栽谀抢锍燥埡土奶臁�

每天都上電腦課。每人一臺電腦，可以玩游戲。

有藏書豐富的圖書館，網(wǎng)球場和游泳池。

作業(yè)少，課外活動少。周么不用做作業(yè)。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My ideal school

I get up late, so I hope I can go to school late and school finishes early. I want to have more free time to play games. There is a big and bright dining hall in our school. We can eat and chat there. We can have Computer Studies every day. Everyone has one computer to play computer games. My ideal school has a library with lots of library books, it also has a tennis court and a swimming pool. We want to have less homework and more after-school activities. It is better that we do not have to do any homework at weekends.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用提綱的給材料作文。要求介紹自己的理想學校，所給的材料非常的詳細，我們在寫作中要合理安排，使描述更通順，更有條理。

【亮點說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，如：It is better that…,等。

考點：提綱作文。