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書面表達(dá)

假如你們學(xué)校要開展“創(chuàng)建和諧校園(to build a harmonious campus)”活動，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇倡議書，號召大家為創(chuàng)建和諧校園而努力。詞數(shù)：100詞左右。(短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))

要點提示：

1．努力學(xué)習(xí)，參加課外活動；

2．有愛互助，尊敬師長；

3．愛護(hù)花草樹木，不隨地亂扔廢棄物。

Our school is like our home．We should try to build up a harmonious campus．________________________________

Answer 1

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解析：

Our school is like our home．We should try to build up a harmonious campus． 　　First of all, we should work hard at our lessons．After school, we had better take an active part in all kinds of school activities to help improve our health and study． 　　Then we should be friendly to one another．We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates． 　　Thirdly, it is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy．We shouldn't throw wastes around or pick flowers． 　　Please do your best to make our school more and more beautiful． 　　評分說明： 　　要求考生用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r態(tài)、語態(tài)、句式和詞語，完整準(zhǔn)確地表述所提示的內(nèi)容，書寫工整。分四檔評分： 　　1、短文通順完整，表達(dá)清楚, 語言基本無誤，12－15分; 　　2、短文較通順完整，表達(dá)基本清楚，語言有少量錯誤，8－11分; 　　3、能寫明基本要點，短文不夠通順完整，語言有較多錯誤，但尚能達(dá)意，4－7分; 　　4、僅能寫明部分要點，短文不完整，語言錯誤多，影響意思表達(dá)，0－3分。