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近期，我國(guó)一名中學(xué)生隨父母旅游時(shí)，在埃及一著名景點(diǎn)文物上刻寫“××到此一游”，此事經(jīng)媒體曝光后，在國(guó)內(nèi)引起極大反響。作為一名中學(xué)生，你就“如何文明旅游”這一話題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

提示：1、旅游中不文明的陋習(xí)，如……；

2、文明意識(shí)和行為，如……；

3、詞數(shù)80左右（首句已給出，不計(jì)算在總詞數(shù)之內(nèi)）。

Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life._________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest. Some make noises in public places. Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on. As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors. For example, throw rubbish into dustbins and don’t write or draw on the relics. Don’t make noises in public places. We’d better follow guides and obey orders. At the same time, we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions.

【解析】本題是就一起熱點(diǎn)網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)間發(fā)表看法。故動(dòng)筆前先要圍繞自己想要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)確定材料，表達(dá)自己對(duì)這起事件的看法，同時(shí)注意自己是中國(guó)人，要自覺的維護(hù)自己國(guó)家的形象。結(jié)合材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在及時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。