寫(xiě)作：請(qǐng)向大家介紹一下自己的一位朋友（15分）

要求：1.寫(xiě)成短文形式，要有題目， 50字左右

2.內(nèi)容主要包括朋友的姓名，年齡，性別,長(zhǎng)相，身高，所在班級(jí)以及所喜歡的食物，服裝，顏色，運(yùn)動(dòng)等。

3.語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確,字跡工整。

4.注意不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。

 

 

 

 

Li Na is my best friend. She’s thirteen years old. She’s 1.60 metres tall. She has long black hair and she wears glasses. She is very lovely and pretty.She is in Class2 Grade7.She likes eating dumplings,chocolates, peanuts and vegetables. She likes reading and writing. She has many hobbies, such as dancing, running and playing volleyball. Her favorite color is red, because she likes wearing red dress. We always have fun at school.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是要認(rèn)真挖掘材料內(nèi)涵，然后用英語(yǔ)把這些東西表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱，寫(xiě)作中注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的變化及主謂一致問(wèn)題。注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用簡(jiǎn)單句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，沒(méi)有明顯的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。在學(xué)習(xí)中如果注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：材料作文。

 

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