Question

Writing(本題共15分，A題5分，B題10分)

（A）文明禮貌是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，但是在校園里在我們的身邊經(jīng)常會看到一些不文明的行為，作為中學(xué)生你認(rèn)為什么樣的行為是文明的行為，請用五句話概括文明的行為。

Being Polite Students

 

(B)現(xiàn)在在我們國家有很多的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，請以My favourite festival 為題寫一篇短文。

要求：1.詞數(shù)80—100詞

2.字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)正確，邏輯清晰。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

As a middle school student, politeness is our compulsory lessons everyday, so, how to be polite? I think we should

do the following

1, to see the elders should say hello.

2, enter the room before knocking at the door.

3, in the home not to speak loudly.

4, when the guests come should say hello, when guests leave should say goodbye.

5, don't be late for school, should finish the homework on time.

If we can do all of the above, I think, we are a polite people

(B)

My favorite festival

My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. Why? Because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival.

The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country. It is in January or February. Our family get together. We have a big dinner at my grandparents’ home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and I both get red packets from our grandparents. My parents usually go shopping with me. We buy some nice clothes for ourselves. We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books or surf the Internet. Sometimes, we greet other people on the phone.I’m always happy at the Spring Festival.

【解析】

試題分析：這兩篇都是話題作文，所給提示簡潔明了，要求明確，話題內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)際，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真審題，勾勒要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文中要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)以及主謂一致問題。同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這兩篇短文能夠根據(jù)寫作提示，較好地把與寫作相關(guān)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行歸納整合，要點(diǎn)全面，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯；同時(shí)，靈活使用多種句式，使文章脈絡(luò)清晰，層次鮮明。此外，文章中還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，這為文章增色不少。在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中注意加強(qiáng)練筆，掌握一些常用句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。