Question

Tom	Appearance（外貌）	又高又壯，戴眼鏡，總是面帶笑容
	Nationality（國(guó)籍）	英國(guó)
	Personalities（個(gè)性）	幽默，慷慨；樂(lè)于助人（請(qǐng)舉一例）
		喜歡旅游，上個(gè)月去了北京，參觀了很多名勝。
	Future plan	長(zhǎng)大后想當(dāng)一名社會(huì)工作者。（說(shuō)明原因）

 
要求：1. 須包含以上所有提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
I have a good friend named Tom.______________________________________________

Answer 1

I have a good friend named Tom. He comes from England. He is tall and strong. He wears glasses. He always wears a smile on his face.
Tom has a good sense of humour. He is generous and helpful. He often helps us with our homework..
Tom likes travelling. Last month, he went to Beijing with his family. He visited many places of interest there.
Tom wants to be a social worker when he grows up. Then he can listen to people’s problems and help them to solve their problems.

這是一篇給材料作文。給出的材料比較詳細(xì)，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是單數(shù)第三人稱較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。