Question

現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物很流行，假如你的朋友想在網(wǎng)上買一款MP4， 但她不知如何操作，請你根據(jù)表格中的提示寫一篇短文， 向他介紹網(wǎng)上購物的益處，購買MP4的過程及網(wǎng)上購物的不利因素。
要求：1.文中談?wù)摼W(wǎng)上購物的益處和不利因素均不少于兩點。
2.語言規(guī)范，80詞左右。文章的題目和開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總數(shù)。

Advantages	1…   2…
Process	look through the shopping website choose the thing you want fill in the form (information of credit card, address and so on click “Enter” get the thing by mail
Disadvantages	1…   2…

提示詞語：convenient adj. 方便的； in good quality 質(zhì)量好
Shopping Online
Nowadays shopping online is very popular…

Answer 1

Nowadays shopping online is very popular. I think shopping online is very convenient. You can buy anything online you want without leaving home. Shopping online will save much time.
What’s more, it’s often at a low price. If you want to buy an MP4, you can look through the shopping website , type MP4 on the website and you can find all kinds of MP4s. Then choose your favorite. What you must do is to fill in a form including your personal information, such as credit card number, name and address. Finally, click “Enter”. You’ll get the MP4 by mail in a few days.
Make sure the website is safe, or someone can steal your money and other things. Be careful that the MP4 you buy is in good quality. I hope you’ll get a good one.

這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料非常詳細，寫作中注意從正反兩方面介紹網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)缺點。在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，注意情態(tài)動詞的應(yīng)用。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。