Question

學(xué)生會要表彰一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，Tom想推薦他的同學(xué)John競爭最樂于助人獎(Most Helpful Student Award)。請以Tom的名義給學(xué)生會主席寫一封推薦信。詞數(shù)約80，不包括已給出的開頭和結(jié)尾。
推薦信中必須包括下列要點(diǎn)：John
1、有禮貌，勤奮，樂于助人，常幫助同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)
2、聰明，記憶力好，學(xué)東西很快
3、經(jīng)常為希望工程募集物品，照顧老年之家的老人
4、電腦用得好，經(jīng)常為幫扶俱樂部(the Helping Hands Club)從網(wǎng)上獲取資料
5、上周，一個小男孩迷路，John將他送回家，男孩的父母很感激他。
Dear Sir
I would like                                                              
                                                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        
We will be glad if he can win the award.
Thank you
Yours faithfully
Tom
Best wishes for you!  Hope to see you soon!

Answer 1

Dear Sir
I would like  to recommend John for the Most Helpful Student Award. He 
is polite, helpful and often helps with our lessons. Besides that, he is clever and
learns things well. He often cares the elderly. He is good at Computer and can
look for things on the Internet for the Helping Hands Club. Last week, a boy lost
his way. John sent him home so the boy’s parents were grateful to him.        
We will be glad if he can win the award.
Thank you
Yours faithfully
Tom
Best wishes for you!  Hope to see you soon!

試題分析：這是一篇推薦信，學(xué)生會要表彰一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，Tom想推薦他的同學(xué)John競爭最樂于助人獎(Most Helpful Student Award)。請以Tom的名義給學(xué)生會主席寫一封推薦信，所以要用第一人稱來寫。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)80左右，不要太多也不要太少。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于書信類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。