Question

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m member of _____.”
(以”我是``````的一員”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符合不占格子”)
提示:你可以作為任意興趣小組或者社團(tuán)的人員,或者作為家庭,班級(jí),社區(qū)額的一員,寫(xiě)出你的經(jīng)歷,感受等.
Use the following points as a reference.
Are you glad to be a member of ``````?
What do you do in it?
How do you feel as such a member?
【寫(xiě)作思路】
一、審題
本文要求寫(xiě)一篇介紹自己作為某興趣小組或某社團(tuán)成員的文章，要求學(xué)生寫(xiě)出自己的經(jīng)歷以及感受等。
二、列舉寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)
1. have been a member of singing and dancing club for +時(shí)間；
2. I’m an actor in the this club.
3. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day.
三、列出關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型
be a member of , an actor, singing and dacing, feel very happy,

Answer 1

范文
A Possible Version：
I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing Club
Hello, everyone! I’m very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. I like singing and dancing very much. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day. It makes me feel very happy.

作文標(biāo)題為“I'm a member of…”，這樣的考題讓每個(gè)考生都有話(huà)可說(shuō)。題目包含5張圖片提示，分別代表家庭、歌舞俱樂(lè)部、愛(ài)護(hù)動(dòng)物者社團(tuán)、自然科學(xué)競(jìng)賽社團(tuán)
題目中蘊(yùn)含“責(zé)任意識(shí)和公民意識(shí)”的兩綱內(nèi)容，與“往年的考題以強(qiáng)調(diào)自我感受居多”不同，今年考題引導(dǎo)學(xué)生思考我可以為他人、為集體付出些什么。
在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中一定要注意提示“一定要表達(dá)具體是什么的成員”，根據(jù)幾個(gè)guided questions,最好能在開(kāi)頭表達(dá)是否開(kāi)心加入此團(tuán)體，后面緊接著描述原因即在作為一員主要工作是什么，最后再來(lái)一個(gè)作為成員的感受作為總結(jié)，這樣整個(gè)作文的結(jié)構(gòu)就清楚了。但想獲得很高分，還要盡量避免語(yǔ)法拼寫(xiě)等錯(cuò)誤，寫(xiě)出一些比較出彩的復(fù)合句，這就需要同學(xué)平時(shí)勤練基本功了。