Question

假設(shè)你將代表初三畢業(yè)生在畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。
要點(diǎn)如下：

回顧	校園很美麗；每學(xué)期有豐富多彩的活動(dòng)，例如，去年地震過(guò)后，學(xué)校組織了捐款活動(dòng)；老師教學(xué)生動(dòng)有趣；三年來(lái)學(xué)到很多，進(jìn)步大。
感謝	老師的培養(yǎng)，父母的支持，同學(xué)的幫助
祝愿	我希望……

1. 發(fā)言稿須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
2. 最后一個(gè)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1~2句；
3. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Good afternoon, everyone! It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2012. _______________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Our school is very beautiful. We have colorful activities every term. For example, our school made a donation after the earthquake last year. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years. We should thank our teachers for their teaching, our parents for their support, and our classmates for their help. I hope our school will be more beautiful and everyone will have a good time here.

解析這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)來(lái)寫(xiě)的，所以主要把要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來(lái)，注意單詞拼寫(xiě)正確，語(yǔ)法沒(méi)有問(wèn)題，適當(dāng)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫�。前面的回顧和感謝主要是結(jié)合要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述，最后的祝愿是學(xué)生根據(jù)自己的情況進(jìn)行發(fā)揮，表現(xiàn)學(xué)生發(fā)散思維的能力。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意不同時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用，例如回顧階段，主要是過(guò)去時(shí)，表示感謝時(shí)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，祝愿當(dāng)然用一般將來(lái)時(shí)了。在范文中，一些詞組和句型的運(yùn)用值得學(xué)習(xí)，made a donation “捐贈(zèng)”make their lessons lively and interesting“使課堂生動(dòng)有趣” made great progress“取得很大的進(jìn)步” We should thank our teachers for their teaching, our parents for their support, and our classmates for their help.這句話用的是排比的關(guān)系。