Question

假如你是John，今天你在網(wǎng)上看到了下面的帖子。請根據(jù)帖子內(nèi)容，談?wù)勀愕慕?jīng)歷或看法，并針對作者的困惑提出一些建議(不少于3條)。

要求：①不要寫出真實(shí)校名和姓名；        ②字?jǐn)?shù)在100左右；

Dear Madam，

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I hope my advice is of some value to you, please let me know if that works for you or not!

Good luck!

John

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Eear Madam,

  I’m sorry to know that you have so much trouble with you daughter,first,I think your daughter should take an active part in all kinds of activities, and try to talk with teachers and friends.She can learn to get on well with others.She likes playing computer games.But don’t worry.You may invite some of her friends to have a word with her.Let her know to find that spending too much time on computer games is bad for her health and studies.Try to encourage her to do other things instead of playing computer games.What’s more, as her mother,you should learn something about computer games so that you and your daughter may have something to talk about.Besides,you may find some topics that your daughter is interested in, and then she may talk with you.Don’t lose heart. It will be all right.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文是一個(gè)母親給專家的一封信，她的女兒孤獨(dú)，打籃球，愛玩電腦游戲，你需要你給出建議。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如:  take an active part in，all kinds of，get on well with others，Try to encourage her to do ，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。