Question

假如你是陳杰，你的一位美國(guó)筆友Jack即將到杭州學(xué)習(xí)一年漢語(yǔ)。他在給你的來(lái)信中表達(dá)了自己的擔(dān)心，同時(shí)尋求你的幫助。請(qǐng)你給他回信，在信中陳述他的三個(gè)顧慮，并給出相對(duì)應(yīng)的建議。

Jack’s problems	Your suggestions
1． 飲食不習(xí)慣	杭州有很多美食。有許多西餐廳。… …
2. 語(yǔ)言水平差	… …
3. 會(huì)感到孤獨(dú)	… …

 
注意：1. 詞數(shù)70左右。
2. 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。
3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)與結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
參考詞匯：get used to , be good at, feel lonely, western food, delicious,
Dear Jack,
I am very glad to receive your letter. In your letter you mentioned the three problems you may face in China.
Best regards,
Chen Jie

Answer 1

Hangzhou has been the most popular city of china。So more and more people want to visit Hangzhou.
I think the best time to visit Hangzhou is spring , for the weather of that time is very fine ,neither too hot nor too cold . The warm wind will make you feel happy. Many people visit Hangzhou for its beautiful scenes and cultural inheritance .
In Hangzhou, there are many delicious snacks and there are also many good western restaurants. So If you don’t like Chinese food, you can choose western food. You don’t need to worry yourchinese, because there are many Chinese students speaking English. And They speak it fluently. You can talk with them freely. You will not feel lonely. Because Chinese people are very kind and friendly.
There are many other things you can do in Hangzhou, as shopping in the big shopping mall, visit the different kinds parks and so on.
I hope you can have a happy time in Hangzhou.

這是一篇提綱類作文，寫一封回信。題目中給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)料,在心中對(duì)涉及內(nèi)容都要有所回應(yīng)。然后根據(jù)內(nèi)容確定主要人稱,時(shí)態(tài)等問(wèn)題.根據(jù)材料可知本文人稱問(wèn)題較為復(fù)雜,時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài), 注意主謂一致問(wèn)題.寫作中注意應(yīng)用一些比較經(jīng)典的句式短語(yǔ)等來(lái)提高作文的文采，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。為了使表達(dá)更有邏輯性，適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。