Question

初中生活即將結(jié)束，新的生活即將開啟,請為你最要好的同學(xué)寫一段畢業(yè)留言：他(她)給你留下的深刻印象、你們在一起的快樂時(shí)光以及對他(她)最美好的祝愿。

要求：1、可參考下圖所給提示詞，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

2、字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右。

School life in middle school will come to an end soon.                                           

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                           

 

Answer 1

【答案】

School life in middle school will come to an end soon. I’ll never forget you. You are an outgoing boy/girl. There’s always a smile on your face and everyone likes to make friends with you. We used to play basketball on the playground. Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. At this very moment, I’m saying goodbye to you, I just want to give you my best wishes: I hope you are happy and healthy forever. I hope you are successful in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，寫一段畢業(yè)留言。動(dòng)筆前先確定書寫內(nèi)容，可以先簡單描述這紀(jì)念相處的情況，然手再表達(dá)一下自己的感想，祝福等。由于是抒情性短文，故用將來時(shí)態(tài)較多，注意時(shí)態(tài)和時(shí)間狀語的搭配。寫作中選取自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)同寫，主要不要犯語法書寫的低級錯(cuò)誤。

考點(diǎn)：命題作文

點(diǎn)評：這類作文的說些說難也容易，難在沒有給出具體材料，需要自己組織材料，易在可以選取自己熟悉的內(nèi)容寫。不跑題不偏題是寫好此類作文的關(guān)鍵，動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀題目，要求然后在動(dòng)筆。