Question

以“Animals, our friends!”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。
要求：1）70詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2）展開(kāi)自己的想象，可以通過(guò)“dogs, cows, hens 等幾種動(dòng)物來(lái)進(jìn)行說(shuō)明。
3）適當(dāng)運(yùn)用get on well with….; get …from…; guide dogs; the blind; milk; hens; eggs; interesting; for example; save 等詞匯。
4）意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。
Animals, our friends!
It is important to ________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Animals, our friends!
It is important to get on well with animals because some of the animals can give us a lot of help. For example, guide dogs are the eyes of the blind. They help the blind a lot in their daily lives. Cows provide 
us with milk. We get eggs from hens every day. Some of the animals are very interesting. Animals are our friends. I can’t imagine a world without animals. But animals are fewer and fewer. Let’s do something to save them.

解析試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)是寫(xiě)動(dòng)物是我們的朋友，所以寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)敘述與動(dòng)物相處的重要性，以及如何與動(dòng)物相處。注意書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)進(jìn)行舉例說(shuō)明；注意人稱的運(yùn)用，以及時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。應(yīng)該將提示語(yǔ)合理運(yùn)用。還應(yīng)注意表達(dá)的層次性，以及連詞的運(yùn)用。
考點(diǎn)：本題考查提綱作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式，但也盡量不要用單一的句型。