Question

作文（計(jì)10分）

人生最美麗的回憶就是你與他人的友誼。同學(xué)們，你是否也有很多志同道合的好朋友呢？請(qǐng)選擇一位你初中階段最好的朋友，說說你們的相同點(diǎn)，以及你們的不同點(diǎn)。

要求：1.內(nèi)容包括：①你與好朋友的相同點(diǎn)。②你與好朋友在外貌、性格和興趣三個(gè)方面的不同點(diǎn)。

2.詞數(shù)：60-80詞

3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Best Friend

Han Mei is my best friend. We know each other since we were born. Because we are twins. She is my elder sisiter. Like most twin sisters, we look almost the same. The most easy way to distinguish us is that she has a scar on her arm. It is my fault. When we are six years old, we played beside the stair, and then I pushed her down the stair accidently. She got hurt but not blame me at all. That is the history of her scar. Since then our parents always recognize us with that mark. Han Mei is better than me in study. So, sometimes I was criticized by our mother for failing the exam, she will pretend me to receive the criticism, without making my mother see the mark. I’ m so thankful for this. So sometimes I will pretend her to take part in the piano class, as she is not interested in it. It is so interesting to play such game.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一片說明文，介紹自己的譯為朋友，要求說明你們之間的相似點(diǎn)，不同之處，文章應(yīng)該從兩個(gè)部分說明，一是相似之處，二是不同之處。注意文章的連貫性。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章鮮明的介紹了我的雙胞胎姐妹也是我的最好的朋友，文中運(yùn)用表語從句The most easy way to distinguish us is that she has a scar on her arm.，非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)she will pretend me to receive the criticism, without making my mother see the mark.，使得文章不再枯燥的是簡(jiǎn)單句的羅列。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。