Question

假如你是李丹，請根據(jù)所給提示，用英文寫一篇推薦信，推薦王艷同學當選校優(yōu)秀學生。詞數(shù)：80左右。信的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)、

1.王艷，16歲；一個聰明的女孩,臉上總是掛著微笑。

2.學東西快，擅長數(shù)學。

3.籃球打得很好，是校籃球隊的成員。

4.非常樂于助人。經(jīng)常在車上給老人讓座。他是足夠勇敢從火里救出一個男孩。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award.

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We think that Wang Yan should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Dan

 

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award.

Wang Yan is a 16-year-old girl. She always wears a smile on her face. She is very clever and studies very hard. She is good at maths and she learns everything quickly. She plays basketball very well and she is in our school basketball team. After school, she often plays basketball with her classmates. She is always ready to help others. She often gives her seat to the old people on the bus. Once she was brave enough to save a boy in the fire.

We think that Wang Yan should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Dan

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以李丹的身份寫一封推薦信，推薦王艷同學當選校優(yōu)秀學生。信的開頭和結(jié)尾都已經(jīng)寫好了，我們需要將主要內(nèi)容，即王艷的一些情況表述清楚。題目中給我們列出了一個提綱，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。這些內(nèi)容包括王艷的年齡、學習情況、愛好和她的性格特點。這些內(nèi)容應該用第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)表達，所以要特別注意每句話中謂語動詞應該用三單的形式。其中在最后一點中王艷救了一個男孩，這一點我們需要用過去時態(tài)來表達，也要注意動詞的正確形式。寫作時，要注意多使用好的句型和短語以及一些連詞，使整篇短文表達流暢，意思連貫。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。短文中作者按照題目要求介紹了王艷的情況，推薦她當選校優(yōu)秀學生。首先作者介紹了王艷的基本情況，Wang Yan is a 16-year-old girl. She always wears a smile on her face，這里使用了一個短語16-year-old girl，比較亮眼；接下來寫的是王艷的學習情況，She is very clever and studies very hard. She is good at maths and she learns everything quickly.，這幾句話使用的是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，所以謂語動詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式；然后作者寫的是王艷的愛好，這里主要使用的是并列句。最后著重謝了王艷樂于助人，She is always ready to help others.、Once she was brave enough to save a boy in the fire。這里用了比較好的句型be ready to do sth. 和be +形容詞enough to do sth.，很好的將意思表達了出來。整篇短文意思連貫，表達準確到位。

考點：提綱類作文。