Question

近年來中國中學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了“出國留學(xué)熱”，成千上萬的中學(xué)生已經(jīng)去國外學(xué)習(xí)，而另外的一些學(xué)生也一直在設(shè)法出國，對此人們有不同的看法。請根據(jù)下面的提示，以Studying Abroad為題寫一篇短文。

優(yōu)點：1. 了解外國文化；2. ……

缺點：1. 出國費用高； 2. ……

注意：1. 短文須包括所有要點，內(nèi)容連貫，可適當發(fā)揮；

2. 80詞左右，開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Studying Abroad

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with teenagers in China.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. Thousands of them have gone to foreign countries to study. Many more are trying their best to go abroad. There are many advantages in studying abroad. First, students who study abroad can learn more about different cultures. Second, they can improve their foreign languages more quickly. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience. And the high cost is also a problem for common families. What do you think of this question?

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們就““出國留學(xué)熱” 寫一篇英語短文。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括兩部分的內(nèi)容。一是出國留學(xué)的優(yōu)點， 如可以了解外國文化；二是出國留學(xué)的缺點，如出國費用高。提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者從優(yōu)點與缺點兩個方面客觀闡述了出國留學(xué)的問題，層次清晰表達到位。短文中需要作者自己補充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯。如Second, they can improve their foreign languages more quickly. 等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如On the other hand, there are some disadvantages.等。

考點：提綱類作文。