Question

書面表達(dá) （15 分）

為自己設(shè)計(jì)一個(gè)旅行計(jì)劃，要包括下列問題：

1. 想去哪？為什么？

2. 想在那兒待幾天？

3. 怎么去？為什么？

4. 打算什么時(shí)候開始旅行？獨(dú)自一人還是與別人同去？

5. 在這次旅行期間，打算做些什么？

要求：意思連貫、通順，詞數(shù)在 60~80 之間。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

A plan for a trip

1. I'd like to go to the countryside for a trip because the environment there is quite good.The air there is fresh, and I can enjoy a quiet life. The food and vegetables are good, too.

2. I'm going to stay for a week.

3. I'll go by bike. In this way, I can take exercise as well.

4. I'll go tomorrow morning.

5. When I go, I'll take some school things, like books, pens, pencils and so on.

I decided to give them to the poor students in the countryside. And I'll try my best to help them with their study.

6. I think I'll be very tired but I'll enjoy myself.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓我們自己制訂旅游計(jì)劃的小短文。小作者把要求寫的幾點(diǎn)都表述得很清晰。另外，寫作時(shí)，小作者還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者把列舉的要點(diǎn)都寫了進(jìn)去。這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如I'd like to go to the countryside for a trip because the environment there is quite good. I decided to give them to the poor students in the countryside. And I'll try my best to help them with their study. 有一些好的固定短語還有連詞。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。