Question

Write at least fifty words on the topic “Changes in our life”.( 以“我們生活中的變化”為題, 寫一段不少于50個(gè)單詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格) 8%（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名，校名及其其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分）

Suggested points:

Talk about some changes in your life. (At least 2 changes)

What do you think of these changes? Why?

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Changes in our Life

There have been many changes in our life. With the development of the economy, my life is better off. For the food I usually had traditional Chinese food for every meal. Nowadays I can afford any delicious food including western foods. For the housing I have moved from a small room to a big and bright flat. My father used to ride an old bike to work a year ago. At present he drives his private car to travel. I believe our life will be better and better in the future.

I think it is because the development of science and technology that our life has changed so much.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以我們生活中的變化為題寫一篇文章。根據(jù)題目的要求，我們要在短文中列舉我們的生活都發(fā)生了哪些變化，學(xué)生們在寫作時(shí)可以從我們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活的小事上想想。如吃飯、穿衣、交通工具等。過去我們是什么樣的，現(xiàn)在又是什么樣的。通過這個(gè)對比的描寫，展現(xiàn)出生活中發(fā)生的變化。按照題目的要求，我們要至少舉兩個(gè)例子來說明。另外，在短文里，我們還要說明，我們的生活發(fā)生這些變化的原因。如科技的發(fā)展、我們國家的好的政策等。寫作時(shí)要注意層次清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。多使用好的句型、句式，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作為。在這篇短文中，作者按照題目的要求，給我們講述了我們生活中發(fā)生的變化。作者給我們舉了一些例子來說明，如For the food I usually had traditional Chinese food for every meal. Nowadays I can afford any delicious food including western foods. For the housing I have moved from a small room to a big and bright flat. My father used to ride an old bike to work a year ago. At present he drives his private car to travel.，這里涉及了吃、住和行三個(gè)方面。這幾句話構(gòu)成了文章的主體，里面用到的好的短語和句型如afford、including、used to do sth.、at present 等。最后作者用一句話講述了發(fā)生這些變化的原因，這個(gè)句子還用到了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，是一個(gè)非常好的句式。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。