Question

書面表達(dá)。（10分）

近來(lái),湖南衛(wèi)視親子互動(dòng)節(jié)目<爸爸去哪兒>火爆熒屏,其中一個(gè)叫做Kimi的小男孩更是獲得了萬(wàn)千觀眾的喜歡.請(qǐng)你依據(jù)下方表格內(nèi)容,用英文寫一篇小短文介紹他.

注意：要點(diǎn)完整，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范（字體工整，注意大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)），40個(gè)詞左右。

Name	Kimi
From	Taiwan
Age	5
Look	face-round eye-big mouth-wide hair-black
Clothes	T-shirt-white pants-blue

 

 

 

 

 

 

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

The boy is Kimi. He is from Taiwan. Kimi is 5 years old. He has a round face and big eyes. His mouth is wide and his hair is black. Look, Kimi is in a white T-shirt and blue pants now. He is cool. Do you like him?

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓小作者介紹Kimi的一些情況。小作者把要求寫的幾點(diǎn)都表述得很清晰。另外，寫作時(shí)，小作者還注意了語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者把列舉的要點(diǎn)都寫了進(jìn)去。這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如He has a round face and big eyes. Look, Kimi is in a white T-shirt and blue pants now.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。