Question

我市在爭創(chuàng)文明城市(civilized city)，作為中學(xué)生，你該如何做呢？校學(xué)生會(huì)正舉行以“How To Be a Civilized Student”為主題的英語作文比賽，請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇100詞左右的短文參賽。

to be a civilized student	be polite …
respect our teachers and classmates…
help others …
obey traffic rules…
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How To Be a Civilized Student

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Answer 1

One possible version:

As we all know, our city is creating a civilized city. As students, we should try to be civilized students. What should we do?

First of all, it’s very important for us to know what to do and what not to do. In school, we should respect our teachers and classmates. We must go to school on time and we shouldn't be late for class. In class, we should listen to the teachers carefully. Also, we’re supposed to be friendly to others and offer help to a person in trouble. It’s our duty to follow the traffic rules and not to litter to keep our city clean. Besides, don’t forget to keep low voice in public places.

In a word, if we follow all the rules, our city will be more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式為文章增色不少.如It’s very important for us to know what to do and what not to do我們知道做什么和不該做什么是非常重要的。We’re supposed to be friendly to others and offer help to a person in trouble. 我們應(yīng)該對別人友好和幫助有困難的人。另外First of all、Also、 Besides的使用使得文章非常條理。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。