Question

假如你叫李華，是“邯鄲好少年”的候選人之一，請你以“I Am Unique”為題，寫一份演講稿，介紹你在家里以及在學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)。

寫作要求：

1. 詞數(shù)60~80，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 文稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名及相關(guān)信息；

3. 寫作的要點要緊扣主題，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

I Am Unique

My name is Li Hua. I am lucky to be chosen as one of Handan’s Good Children. Now, I want to _____________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

One possible version：

I Am Unique

My name is Li Hua. I am lucky to be chosen as one of Handan’s Good Children. Now, I want to say something about myself. I think I am a unique boy.

When I am at home, I listen to my parents, I respect them and sometimes I help them with some housework. Both of my parents say I am a good boy.

When I am at school, I listen to my teachers carefully in class. After class, I usually help my classmates do a lot of things, the floor, doing the homework, and so on.

In a word, I think I am a good and unique boy. I believe I can do better in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己被評為“邯鄲好少年”以及在家和在學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am......，I help ……及I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了自己被評為“邯鄲好少年”，接下來介紹自己在家的表現(xiàn)以及介紹自己在學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)，最后認(rèn)為自己將來會更好。此處用了help them with ，like cleaning，In a word,等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。