Question

書面表達 (本大題共10分)

你校要評選“德才雙馨”的好少年 “ Excellent Teens with both Ability and Moral Integrity”，你打算推選王輝，請你用英語寫一封推薦信。內(nèi)容提示如下：

1. 癡迷于畫畫，對自己很嚴格; 不斷搜尋更好的東西來提高自己；

2. 擅長用色彩來表達自己的想法；最喜歡紅色，因為紅色能使他迅速作出決定；

3. 盡管學習很忙，也從不放棄自己的愛好；

4. 自去年來，已幾次在美術大賽中獲獎；

5. 經(jīng)常為大家出力, 如：……

注意：1. 推薦信須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

2. 要點5須用2-3句話展開合理想象，作適當發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)在90個左右，信的首尾已在答題卷上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

4. 信件內(nèi)容請寫在答題卷指定位置上。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Sir

I’m writing to recommend Wang Hui to be the Excellent Teen with both ability and Moral Integrity.

Wang Hui is crazy about drawing and very strict with himself. He is always searching for something better to improve himself. He is good at using colours to express himself. He likes red best, because red can help him make decisions quickly. Although he is busy with his study, he never gives up his hobby. He has won several drawing competitions since last year. He often helps us. For example, he often spends time helping with the classroom blackboard newspaper. He even does something to make his community more beautiful at weekends.

I think Wang Hui is the most suitable person to achieve the title . I hope that you agree with me.(90 words）

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細但很簡單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要仔細考慮，不可遺漏要點，也可適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，主語是第三人稱。

【亮點說明】這篇文章主要是關于介紹信的格式及信中內(nèi)容的時態(tài)。文中使用了be crazy about，be strict with,be good at等較高級的短語和詞匯，而且還應用了although引導的讓步狀語從句，使用了spend doing sth等為文章增色不少。

考點：話題作文。