Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)。
上周學(xué)校舉行了初三年級(jí)家長(zhǎng)會(huì)，家長(zhǎng)、學(xué)生和老師進(jìn)行了面對(duì)面的交流，尤芳芳代表同學(xué)們說(shuō)出了困惑，表示了決心：
1.因?yàn)榻?jīng)�？荚�，她時(shí)常有些壓力，有時(shí)感到心煩意亂；
2.作業(yè)多，沒(méi)有時(shí)間…；不知如何平衡學(xué)習(xí)與玩耍.
3.老師告訴她放松的方法有很多：⑴多與父母或朋友交流，⑵……
4.現(xiàn)在她知道了時(shí)間的重要性，能按時(shí)交作業(yè)，已經(jīng)取得很大的進(jìn)步；
要求：1、短文要包括列舉的要點(diǎn)并且適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2、語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。
3、詞數(shù)100詞以上，文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Last week our school held a parents’ meeting. Parents, students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. She __________________________               
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              

Answer 1

Last week our school held a parents’ meeting.Parents,students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. she often suffers from stress and feels disturbed at times/ from time to time because of exams.she has a lot of /too much homework,so she doesn’t have time for her hobbies.She often doesn’t know how to keep a balance between work and play. Her teacher tells her there are many ways to relax: ⑴she can often communicate with/talk to her parents and friends, ⑵……Now she has known the importance of saving time/it’s important to save time, she hand in her homework on time and has made great progress in study.

試題分析：文章首先對(duì)題目進(jìn)行審清，不要遺漏了某一點(diǎn)。本文首先從尤芳芳所遇到的問(wèn)題著手來(lái)寫(xiě)文章，可以用上suffer from遭受，have difficult in doing sth等句型短語(yǔ)來(lái)表達(dá)她所遇到的困難；然后介紹老師給她提供的方法，可以說(shuō)多與父母交流，多做戶(hù)外運(yùn)動(dòng)等，在表達(dá)過(guò)程中要注意使用連詞來(lái)使文章富有條理；最后表達(dá)她知道了時(shí)間的重要性，能夠合理的利用時(shí)間，取得了很大的進(jìn)步。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文難度不大，寫(xiě)作條理性要把握好，對(duì)于要做的幾件事情，寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中通過(guò)變換句式和用詞上來(lái)提高語(yǔ)言的美度。在一件事情寫(xiě)完后要用上表關(guān)系的連接詞，或平時(shí)積累的各類(lèi)表遞進(jìn)、并列的連詞來(lái)是文章富于活力。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中要多去背誦范文，對(duì)表達(dá)好的句子，短語(yǔ)要進(jìn)行積累，并默寫(xiě)，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無(wú)患。