Question

你的好友David感冒了，你寫信告訴他一些注意事項(xiàng)，提一些合理的建議。60字左右。

Dear David,

I am sorry to hear that you have a cold.

 

 

 

 

 

Yours

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear David,

I am sorry to hear that you have a cold. You should see a doctor. And you should take medicine on time. You also should take more exercise, because it is helpful to your health. You had better drink more hot water .Don’t forget to wear more! And you should have a balanced diet，and eat more fruit and vegetables. It is important to keep healthy.

I hope you will be better soon.

Yours

Lihua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹好友生病了，給他提出注意事項(xiàng)和一些建議。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，二人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：You should……；because it is……；You had better……；It is important to ……;I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)希望好友盡快恢復(fù)健康的愿望。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表達(dá)對好友生病了而感到難過，接下來介紹他應(yīng)注意事項(xiàng)和一些建議，最后表達(dá)希望好友盡快恢復(fù)健康的愿望。此處用了take medicine，take more exercise，is helpful to，forget to，have a balanced diet等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。