Question

書面表達 (本大題共5分)

學(xué)校將舉行初中英語征文比賽，主題是介紹你的朋友Nick，請你根據(jù)下列要點完成征文。

1. 勤奮而有耐心，總是樂于助人，經(jīng)常幫同學(xué)輔導(dǎo)數(shù)學(xué)難題。

2. 我7歲時就跟他交上了朋友。

3. 他愿意替我保守秘密，所以我什么都可以告訴他。

4. 他癡迷于自己動手做，他喜歡修壞了的東西。

5. 他媽媽的生日要到了，他決定……

注意：

1. 短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

2. 第5 要點的內(nèi)容須用1～2句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)70個左右，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality.

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How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

 

Answer 1

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality. He is hardworking and patient. He is always ready to help others. He often helps classmates with Maths problems. I made friends with him when I was 7 years old. He is willing to keep secrets for me, so I can tell him everything. He is crazy about DIY. He likes repairing broken things. His mother’s birthday is coming. He decided to make a birthday card for her by himself. (His mother is sure to like it.

How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要是介紹了自己的朋友Nick，他有很多優(yōu)點是一個值得交往的朋友。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 文中介紹了朋友很多的優(yōu)點，最后引出在他母親生日的時候他決定給母親親自制作一個卡片。He is always ready to help others. He often helps classmates with Maths problems.；I made friends with him when I was 7 years old.這些短語和句子的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：話題作文。