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“中國(guó)夢(mèng)”是我們祖國(guó)母親的偉大夢(mèng)想，有了這個(gè)夢(mèng)想，我們的國(guó)家才能逐步強(qiáng)大，富裕起來。你有自己的夢(mèng)想嗎？

請(qǐng)你以 My dream is to be ------- 為題，談?wù)勀愕南敕ê妥龇ǎ?要求80字左右。

（參考： 如：我的夢(mèng)想是做一名醫(yī)生， 因?yàn)獒t(yī)生能幫助很多病人，醫(yī)生能治病救人，為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想，我一定要努力學(xué)習(xí)）

My dream is to be

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Everyone has his own dream job. Somebody wants to be a scientist or a famous people, for example, a musician, a arter, a businessman and so on. So do I.I also have my dream job. In my mind, I am going to be a good English teacher in my future. Why do I have this dream? Because in my opinion, as an English teacher, I can teach my students to study English well, which includes speaking, singing, listening and so on. The students can learn a forgein language with my help. I hope that the dream is coming as soon as possible.

【解析】

試題分析： 這是篇命題作文，根據(jù)題目的要求可以任意選擇相應(yīng)的內(nèi)容。首先要說明自己的理想到底是什么，陳述一下自己的原因，還要寫出為實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想而采取的相應(yīng)的措施。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】語言精練，語法結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整。

考點(diǎn)：命題作文