Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)

為配合我市開(kāi)展“創(chuàng)建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇參賽短文。

提示：1. 衣著整潔；

2. 保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生；

3. 待人有禮，樂(lè)于助人；

4. 遵守交通規(guī)則；

要求：1. 文章必須包括所給提示中1—4 項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，可展開(kāi)思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息；

3. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Behave Well?

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文

點(diǎn)評(píng):該題型主要考查學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力，在寫(xiě)作中根據(jù)所給提示和語(yǔ)言信息，不遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。做到表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫