Question

情景作文（10分）

Tom 要到中國來讀書，想住在一個中國人的家里，更好地體驗中國中學生的生活。請你寫一篇短文向他介紹你自己，你的家人和你的房間。

注意：1.分三個方面介紹。

2.重點介紹你的房間布置，例舉3件左右的東西的布置。

3.字數(shù)：50左右。

4.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名，班名和校名。

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Answer 1

I am a student .I am thirteen years old.I like basketball.My school is very beautiful.There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I . My father is a doctor. He works very hard. He goes to work on foot everyday. My father is not very tall, but he is strong, he is very kind to his patients and he loves his work.My mother is a teacher. She works in a middle school . She goes to work by car. She is a very good teacher in my eyes. My room has a computer,By computer is a bed and a desk,On top of the desk is a bookshelf,in the house of the a air conditioner.This is my home

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們介紹自己，自己的房間。文章需要我們介紹三個主要部分，一，介紹我自己,這部分我們可以簡單介紹自己的年齡，愛好。二，介紹我的家庭，家庭成員以及他們的基本情況。三，介紹自己的房間布置，至少三樣物品。寫作時注意用我們平時所學的簡單句，合理運用平時所學的描述人的形容詞，注意文章的連貫性。

【亮點說明】這是一篇很不錯的文章，文章準確的完成題目要求，特別是在介紹自己的房間時運用倒裝句，By computer is a bed and a desk,On top of the desk is a bookshelf,in the house of the a air conditioner.This is my home，使文章不再單一枯燥，使文章煥然一新。