Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇文章。

我叫Steve.我每天7點(diǎn)上學(xué)。

我的家離學(xué)校大約2公里。我乘公共汽車(chē)到達(dá)學(xué)校。我從來(lái)不上學(xué)遲到。

我擅長(zhǎng)下象棋。但我不會(huì)彈吉他。

上學(xué)的晚上我不出去，我在家學(xué)習(xí)。

我最喜歡的動(dòng)物是熊貓因?yàn)樗麄兒芸蓯?ài)。

Hello!Everyone!

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is me.Can you tell me about yourself

 

Answer 1

Hello!Everyone!

My name is Steve. I go to school at seven o’clock every morning. I often take the buse to school because it is a little far from my home to my school. It is about two kilometers.

I am goood at playing chess but I can’t play the guitar. How I want to learn to play the guitar! I learn at home on school nights instead of going out. I want to go to a good collage in the future. I like pandas best because they are cute and lovely.

This is me.Can you tell me about yourself

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求自我介紹。主要介紹上學(xué)的方式，自己的愛(ài)好，以及上學(xué)的晚上做什么。內(nèi)容材料已經(jīng)給出，我們?cè)趯?xiě)作時(shí)注意文章的連貫性，適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用連詞，使文章更緊湊。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。能適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用連詞，如because，but等。短語(yǔ)be good at ,instead of ,的應(yīng)用也給文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。