Question

根據(jù)提示，寫一篇100字左右的短文介紹張華的變化。
提示：張華，陽(yáng)光中學(xué)八年級(jí)學(xué)生。家庭富裕。過(guò)去零花錢常常花在買零食和打電腦游戲上。去年夏天，他去了一個(gè)貧困的村子，看見(jiàn)許多窮得上不起學(xué)的孩子。
那次經(jīng)歷影響了他許多。現(xiàn)在，他努力學(xué)習(xí)，將零花錢大部分捐給UNICEF,并積極參加許多慈善活動(dòng)，幫助需要幫助的人。他覺(jué)得………

Answer 1

Zhang Hua is a Grade 9 student of Sunshine Secondary School. His family is rich. He used to spend most of his pocket money buying snacks and playing computer games. He didn’t work so hard at school.
Last summer, he went to a poor village. There he saw many poor children. They couldn’t afford to go to school.
That experience affected Zhang Hua a lot. Now Zhang Hua works very hard at school and he donates most of his pocket money to UNICEF and he takes an active part in many charity activities to help people in need. He thinks it important to help people in need.

這是一篇給材料作文，本文給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，根據(jù)要求可知時(shí)態(tài)中一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)較多，人稱是第三人稱較多。寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。