Question

目前，舉國暢行勤儉節(jié)約、反對鋪張浪費。我們中學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)在這些行動中該做些什么呢？請根據(jù)下面要求，聯(lián)系實際，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
要求：1. 條理清楚，有表明自己觀點的句子。
2. 書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點符號和大小寫使用正確。
3. 短文中應(yīng)盡量包括提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名。文章開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)。
4.參考詞匯：junk food, order the food, eat up, restaurant, healthy food.
Save Food and Eat Healthily
At present, our government has called on the people to save food.

Answer 1

One possible version:
Save Food and Eat Healthily
At present, our government has called on the people to save food. As middle school students, it’s our duty to do something for it.
To save food, we should remember that at any time we should eat up all the food and shouldn’t waste any of food. Especially, when we dine out, we should order the food that we can rightly eat. Because many people in our country don’t have enough food to eat.
To eat healthily, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food at school or at home. Of course, we may eat in the restaurant in case we have no time, but not too often.
At last, we hope that we all work together at once.

試題分析：這是一篇提示作文，內(nèi)容要求以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。目前，舉國暢行勤儉節(jié)約、反對鋪張浪費。我們中學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)在這些行動中該做些什么呢？本文應(yīng)該一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，寫作中注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用如情態(tài)動詞should和多種句式交替運用。以及句子之間的連貫性。
【亮點說明】本文推理清楚。第一段表明觀點，It’s our duty to do something for it.第二段說明為了節(jié)約我們應(yīng)該做什么。用了情態(tài)動詞should表明態(tài)度。同時運用eat up和shouldn’t waste any of food.第三段提出要吃得健康。運用instead of 、in case等較高級的短語為文章增色不少。最后提出希望At last, we hope that we all work together at once.。文章層次清楚，語言表達準確。