Question

手機（cell-phone）是現(xiàn)代人經常使用的通訊工具之一，人們用它交流，收發(fā)短信，

拍照，上網查詢資料等，它使我們的生活方便，快捷。 然而也有人長時間用手機玩

游戲，收發(fā)垃圾微信（wechat），不僅浪費寶貴的時間，也對視力有害處。

請你以cell-phones為題，談談你對手機的看法。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

The cell-phone is getting more and more popular and it is a good media of communication. Because we can use cell-phones to communicate with each other and send short messages to each other. We also can use them to take photos and surf the Internet instead of using computers. They make our daily life convenient and quick.

However, the cell-phones have many disadvantages. Some people spend long time playing the mobile games and receiving or returning wechat. It is bad for our eyes as well as wastes time.

In my opinion, we should spend adequate time in using cell phones. Only do it like that can we make good use of cell phones

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，談談自己對手機的看法。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：The cell-phone is…….；We also can…….；the cell-phones have…….；we should…….等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文后要表達自己對手機的看法。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了手機的作用，接下來介紹手機帶來的弊端，最后提出自己對手機的看法。此處用了communicate with，send short messages，spend time in doing sht; is bad for，等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。