Question

假如你是王林，你準(zhǔn)備暑假參加英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)向你的營(yíng)友介紹一下自己。   
注意：1．不少于60詞，可根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。   
2．短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Name	Wang Lin
Age	13
Home address	No. 101, Huayuan Road, Ji’an
Family members and their jobs	Father: a policeman; mother: a doctor
Favorite subject	English
Likes	Play with dogs; listen to music
Characters （性格）	Friendly, like to help others…

Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Lin. I’m glad to be with you at the English summer camp.                                                                       

Answer 1

Hello, everyone!  My name is Wang Lin. I’m glad to be with you at the English summer camp. I’m 13. I live at No. 101, Huayuan Road, Ji’an. There are three people in my family. They’re my father, my mother and me. My father is a policeman and my mother is a doctor. They like their jobs. At school my favorite subject is English. It’s really interesting. I like to play with dogs. I also like to listen to music. I am friendly. I like to help others, so all my friends like me.
Do you like me? Do you want to be my friends? Thank you for listening.

解析試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫(xiě)一篇介紹自己的演講稿。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，句式，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要為第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
考點(diǎn)：關(guān)于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類(lèi)作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿(mǎn)意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。