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書面表達(dá)（10分）

校團(tuán)委正舉行“暢想未來”的征文活動， 請以“My ideal school ”為題寫一篇文章，不少于80字。文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所寫內(nèi)容需包含以下要點(diǎn)，并加以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.

not far from my home, 10 minutes on foot , clean, beautiful

start at 9:00 a.m. , finish at 4:00p.m.

only four subjects, an hour of homework, all kinds of after-school activities

a big library, a swimming pool, three computer rooms

go on a trip every month

My ideal school

My ideal school is

 

 

 

 

This is my ideal school . I hope my dream can come true some day .

 

Answer 1

My ideal school

My ideal school day will start at 9:30 a.m. because I like sleeping. The school day finishes at 4:00 p.m. We will have more free time to do other things.

My ideal school is not far from my home. It takes 10 minutes to go to school on foot. The school is clean and beautiful. There is a big library. We can read any interesting books we like and have a rest in it. It's wonderful.

We only have four subjects. They are Computer Studies, English, Geography and Swimming. So we have a swimming pool and three computer rooms. We have an hour of homework, so we can do all kinds of after-school activities, such as cooking, dramatic recreation, driving, watching films, reading and singing. In addition, we go on a school trip every month. It's interesting.

This is my ideal school . I hope my dream can come true some day .

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我理想的學(xué)校。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：be far from.....；In addition，等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意本文要根據(jù)文章所列出的要點(diǎn)大綱逐個描述，不可遺漏。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了自己理想學(xué)校的距離，上課時間，主要課程安排，接下來指出學(xué)校的教學(xué)環(huán)境，最后指出想要的娛樂活動。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。